Tuesday, October 4, 2011

Expository Writing: Explanation

Expository Writing: Explanation

Goals:

§ Select an interesting career and write a clear focus statement. Then, give explanations and examples.

§ Begin by getting the reader’s attention. In the middle paragraph, explain the career with details.

§ Use a writing voice that is knowledgeable and show your interest in the topic.

§ Choose words that make every part of your explanation clear.

§ Write clear, complete sentences, including some compound and complex sentences.

§ Create an essay that has correct punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and grammar.

Prewriting: Selecting a topic

Jobs I would like:

§ Language and Writing teacher

§ Lawyer

§ Copywriter

§ Advertiser

§ Researcher

§ Entrepreneur

§ Editor

Prewriting: Finding details

Questions and Answers

What job I would like? Language and writing teacher

Why am I interested in this job? I would like to teach kids on how to develop their language abilities and creativity. I saw how language and writing teacher is happy helping children to write and discover words, phrases, sentences and paragraphs. It is a fulfilling job seeing them learning.

What are the main duties for this job?

§ A language and writing teacher helps children to write words properly.

§ He or she gives feedback on how to develop the language ability of his or her students.

§ He or she creates visual aids to make a happy learning environment.

§ He or she makes lesson plans to teach kids properly.

§ He or she let the students write, recite and formulate write up that is useful for his or her student’s language development.

Why would I be good at this job?

§ I love writing.

§ Reading is my hobby.

§ Language is one of my favorite subjects.

§ I work hard and live for my dream.

§ I studied a major related to language and writing.

Prewriting: Finding special words

§ Research about an article related to language and writing teachers.

§ Enumerate or write down special terms that you could use in your essay.

Writing a focus statement:

Name the job + tell why your are interested in it = a strong focus statement

Example:

Language and writing teacher + I would like to teach kids on how to develop their language abilities and creativity = I want to be a language and writing teacher so that I can teach kids on how to develop their language abilities and creativity.

Writing topic sentences:

Topic sentence 1: Main duties of the job.

Topic sentence 2: Why would I be good at this job?

Framework or organization:

§ Focus statement

§ First topic sentence

§ Details

§ Second topic sentence

§ Details

Starting your essay

§ Start with an interesting fact.

§ Ask a question

§ Tell how you became interested in the job.

Developing the middle part

Using transitions:

§ The most important…

§ Secondly,

§ The third thing…

§ To start,

§ Also,

§ Finally,

§ To begin with,

§ In addition,

§ In conclusion,

§ Use organized list. Include one topic sentence and its supporting details in each paragraph. Connect your ideas with transitions.

Writing the ending of your essay

§ Connect the end to the beginning.

§ Give the reader a final thought.

§ Connect with the reader.

§ End with a surprise.

Career High!

To teach is to nurture and develop the society. Since its teacher’s month, it is the right time to appreciate our teachers who mold our virtues, life plans and future endeavors. I, myself want to be a language and writing teacher so that I can teach kids on how to develop their language abilities and creativity.

A language and writing teacher helps children to write words properly. It is his or her responsibility to guide them using the instrument of blackboard and chalk. Second, he or she gives feedback on how to develop the language ability of his or her students. It is through constant recitation and writing assignment where the teacher can check and spot the flaws. Third, he or she creates visual aids to make a happy learning environment. It is through art and concrete aids that students can identify and learn spontaneously. Fourth, he or she makes lesson plans than an organized classroom teaching is well-maintained. Finally, he or she let the students write, recite and formulate their writing progress through the focus guideline of a language and writing teacher.

What makes me love the job? My personality and motivation to learn from children and teach them in developing their language ability is a plus. In addition, my love in writing and sharing them is fulfilling. Frequent reading – books, magazines and newspapers – is helpful in sharing new ideas to children. Also, language is one of my favorite subjects in school. In summary, my hard work and living for my dream is an additional package that I have. To conclude, a teacher nurtures and develops society.

Writing a Problem-Solution Essay: Litter no more!


Writing a Problem-Solution Essay: Litter no more!

Prewriting: Selecting a topic

Environmental Problems:

§ Flash floods

§ El NiƱo

§ Landslide

§ Dengue

§ Littering * ( I chose this topic)

Why-How Chart

Problem: Littering

Why is the problem serious?

It clogs the drainage causing floods

Smelly environment

Dirty ambience

How can we solve it?

Do not litter on canals or rivers.

Always clean your street.

Practice of proper garbage disposal in our environment.

The Problem +the Solution=Effective opinion statement

Littering on streets+People need to be aware=People should be aware of the bad effects of littering on streets.

Writing Formula:

The beginning of your essay should introduce the problem.

The middle paragraph will begin the topic sentences and includes the why-how chart.

The ending paragraph should ask the reader to do something.

Product: A Problem-Solution Essay

Title: Litter no more!

Throwing pieces of plastic wrappers is as easy as 1-2-3. You don’t need difficult efforts to do so. However, that simple, effortless deed causes terrible effects especially to our environment. It is a rampant undisciplined action of most people nowadays. People don’t look at their conscience of the misdeeds of littering to the environment. Wherein people will reap its harmful effects someday or even surprisingly, which might be terrible, or worst catastrophic?

People should be aware of the bad effects of littering on streets. Littering causes the drainage system clogs due to plastics littered unconsciously. In effect, it is causing floods to the streets and community. A smelly environment that creates inconvenience to all people, and dirty ambience or scenery that is an eyesore for everyone to see.

In order for us to solve the problem, awareness is highly recommended. We should not litter or throw pieces of plastic wrappers and the likes. It is better to clean our streets using broomstick and dustpan. Finally, proper garbage disposal and its proper management would secure prevention.

Are you now aware that littering is really harmful in our environment?